Name is Li Xin, came into the world on 12/06. Currently studying in AMKSS, formerly from Ai Tong School. Proud member of NCC Land.
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Haiz, posting for the sake of posting...
I was writing the prologue for Forest Clans Prophecies: The New Cat earlier on but stopped after a page. Short attention span lol. And I kinda put it off since the start of December.
Okay, I really want review for the front part since my strength in writing is not in describing nature with words. I'll post what I've written so far.
The sky was dark. There was no moon tonight, and the stars were covered by clouds. Two dark shapes slipped through the trees, moving swiftly yet silently.
All of a sudden, one of them stopped. He motioned for his companion to stay still and listen. Voices drifted over to them, loud in the silence of the night. Yet the two were unable to make out the words.
A light breeze blew towards the two, and instinctively, both cats’ claws slid out and their fur bristled. The scent that was carried on the breeze was not of their own Clan, and that meant one thing.
There were intruders in their territory.
As the cat who had first heard the voices moved forward, the other flicked out her tail to bar his way.
“Wait, Whitewater,” she hissed. “We don’t know how many there are.”
The long-haired white tom lashed his tail impatiently. “I know, Darkwhisker. I’m just going to look.”
“I’ll go instead. Your white fur will be easily spotted. My dark fur would blend in,” Darkwhisker meowed quietly, then crouched down and crept towards the sound.
Whitewater followed the dark tabby, ignoring her words. His ears swiveled back and forth, listening for any sounds of ambush.
Darkwhisker stopped all of a sudden, causing Whitewater to crash into her painfully. His mouth opened in a protest, but only a muffled squeak came out as Darkwhisker slapped her tail over his mouth. She shifted a little to the side so that Whitewater could see.
The trail they were following led into a clearing. They were hidden among the roots of a tree that grew close to the edge of the clearing. A few cats were gathered in the clearing itself; Whitewater could see that there were five of them.
“Rogues or loners,” Darkwhisker whispered to Whitewater. He nodded. They carried a scent that did not belong to any of the four Clans of the forest.
Both cats could hear the mews now.
“Ginger, Ghost, this is Fang and Claw,” one of the cats, a dark red tom, meowed, flicking his tail to two massive cats.
“He looks like Thornmask!” Whitewater hissed to Darkwhisker, referring to the deputy of ForestClan.
Darkwhisker nodded silently, still watching.
That's all lol. Writer's block again. Haiz...